Only someone with no concept of the perils faced by REAL victims of racism would write something so ill conceived. The cleverness here doesn't rise above 7th grade cluelessness about the world. And even if you removed the word and concept the rest of the song is poorly written.

It's hard to treat you like a real person Rockin_M because you go by an equally uninspired anonymous handle. But in this case it's the only smart thing you've done here.

My advice is to change the title to something else, remove the word racist from every line and then let this poor effort sink into oblivion.

Sorry to be harsh, but after reading responses that commended this effort I had to speak out. Those of you who simply accepted this in a positive way or suggested it had merit need to take a serious step back as well and ask yourself what in the world you were thinking.

Racism comes in all colors as do those who aid and assist it by looking the other way or patting it on the back. What's next? A pun about the holocaust? Can someone use humor to expose racism? Sure, but this doesn't attempt to nor do I see evidence of a talent great enough to pull it off if he tried. How about learning the skill of SELF editing and SELF censorship? No one on earth needs to post every bad idea they have on a public message board.

Brian

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