Ironically JD, you've made my point via your protest. If you are going to use that word, then use it in context and make a statement that is relevent to the word. Whether people like or dislike your lyric, it's clear you were making a statement in context of the topic and the word, and not making light of it.

In the first lyric, the opposite was true. A very poor attempt at humor which was neither clever, in context nor in good taste. And if he was going for poor taste to start with, the gratuitous use of that word is offensive and serves no purpose beyond offending. It's the same as when someone makes a gratuitous attempt to offend people not for art or even political statement, but merely for the purpose of offending. That is what I have a problem with. In addition, the lyric demonstrated a complete void of talent or artistic merit. Gratuitous crap for it's own sake is a waste of our time and frankly I am not interested in supplying a place for someone to artistically masturbate here. He should do it in his own space and let those of us who want to be a positive part of a community get on with life.

Your lyric, though it has some issues, has little in common with the original. You did an excellent job of illustrated my point to start with. Thanks.

Brian

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