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Hi Magne,
You definitely have the Petty groove thing going on with this one. Very cool lyrics and music.
It looks like others have covered the English issues. Just a small thing in the last line of the bridge.
"But somehow it runs out in the sand"
I assumed this to mean the sands of time, like maybe the sands in an hour glass? If so, then maybe say:
"But somehow it runs out WITH the sand".
Ship it out already!
Ricki
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