Originally Posted by Goran Pesic
I am new in the business.Every word of critique is more than helpful.


You'll get plenty of advice here Goran. I like the concept of your lyrics.

Someone said on another thread recently that “there's no such thing as perfection”. Though we all keep honing our skills towards that end.

Personally, I don't think perfection can occur without imperfection. Lyrics and music need the human vulnerability element to touch the heart. Passion often supersedes reason. And passion is what music making is all about.

Show your naked heart, and it will be as close to perfection as one can get.

Best, John smile