I like the lyric but I'm kind of with Kevin.
The mix seems a mess, almost like a bad upload or something. So not much to comment on.
On a second listen I can hear some really good stuff going on in the tracks. I'm not sure about the vocals though. It almost like auto tune is being used.

Last edited by Bill Robinson; 03/17/10 10:12 PM.

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