V1 has made?? can make?? not sure what you were going to do. and that criss crossed in a pile part I dont understand but I do like the idea of whats going on here but I think more about the room might be need or greater imagery/feeling about how the room feels. and it seems like the singer is the one with the room and yet he is asking "do you go up there?" I dont know maybe I am just being retarded but good one Cal keep it coming
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Aaron Johnson