Hi Dave,

I had a look at your Sound Click site.

I think "Lone Star State Of Mind" is a title to avoid, many have tried to latch on to this theme, and failed, it's allready been done to death by some so called Pro writers,

Your melody needs Dynamics, and the lyrics are quite corny,

you need to find another angle , your own, not someone elses.

That said we all have to learn somehow, and I wish you the best of luck.

Without the right music your clever lyrics will never be heard, if you want success be prepared to re write many times and even change the meter you chose originally