Well I hope you don't mind me dropping by with my "dizzy blonde" viewpoint (lol) but as usual I LOVE the way you write and I actually had a melody/vocal idea for the song but am handicapped by lack of readily available recording equipment. Just wanted to say, GOOD JOB! I especially liked the line:

a soul completely in the dark
you were my guiding star

I love the contrast of that verse.


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