Gary,
what I like most about this is his feeling as if he's being patient yet it's the only thing on his mnd. That internal incongruence makes it click for me. Depending on the music this could be old fashioned or new fangled. Could be rock, country, or cross over. Could even be pop.

You might be wise to leave the music to the composers on this one.

Universal for every generation. Is that redundant?

have fun,
John


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