+ Another thumbs up here. smile

Found the flow in this one beautiful and the story behind the situation great.

Don't know about the use of "fac-sim-ile" for the rhyme with "me"
I love how it stands out but not sure how it sings. Doesn't roll off of the tongue easily IMO.

Either or it doesn't take way anything from the lyric.
Doug


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