Thanks! smile

Now let's keep remembering the point of this challenge, which is to write a lyric to a melody--which involves a lot of active, analytical listening. Now you can hear one version, maybe that will make it easier. This particular piece of music actually offers a good deal of leeway, melodically...so even though I've been encouraging a sense of uniformity to lyrics, well, here's a song I can pretty easily fudge away. I'll sing some more Tuesday, maybe earlier if I can break away from responsibility for a bit, and I think you'll find there are a couple different ways to do it.

Also, I realized that those of you who want to sing this yourselves could probably use a track without the guitar, so I'll post one of those soon...and if you want, I could pitch shift yet another version to better accommodate a woman's voice.

But for now, gotta make some pizzas.

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