Ok...been playing and recording not yet a year. This is a country song. I know the production is not all that but it is the first time I put together a bass player, a drummer, harmonies, and me singing and playing guitar.Lot of work. Some people like it, some say the lyrics aren't that good. Lead guitar part kinda cheesey. Please tell me your thoughts on the following...thanks in advance

1)Production
2)Vocals
3)Lyrics

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Down in Old Mexico

(verse)

Now there's a lot of things I've done
But I'm innocent of this one
You say I have it coming… this time
In another time and place
You say I cheated on your sugar and lace
That was so long ago
Down in Old Mexico

(Verse)
Your calling me back to Texas
To answer for my offenses
And soon I’ll be coming back… to explain
If you'll let me set things right
We’ll buy that dress of white
You wanted so long ago
Down in Old Mexico


(bridge)

I’m coming in on the train
Your looking at me to place blame
A case of mistaken idenity
Don't throw away all our plans
It was another man

Short break ……

(Verse)
I’ve been a loser and a winner
Made it through some tough long winters
Your just not seeing it …my way
It wasn’t me in Matzalan…
You saw with your sister Dawn
So very long ago
Down in old Mexico

Repeat bridge


Last edited by Ted Bryson; 01/20/09 04:48 AM.