Originally Posted by Kaley Willow
It's such a pleasant listen, Ted..... Sounds to me like you've been writing a lot longer than a year.... It has a familiar..take me back a bit feel to it.... smile smile and the lyrics were set up nicely.

this is a very strong line...
You say I cheated on your sugar and lace

if i were to nit it at all...I paused in the bridge between the 3rd and 4th line on the melody connection there..I'm not sure why.. so...that really isn't a nit.... I better go back and check my own posts...because I'm in a typo finding frame of mind I guess.... grin ...just check the you're (s) and ... identity ..
Now..to check my own spellin' grin

best to you Ted... That is an adorable aussie pup...a little girl?....or guy....

best...
Kaley smile


Hi Kaley...I started writing first and had some pro demos done. I wanted to see if I could write something and actually have it make sense when put to music. That got expensive so I tried singing the melody acapella. Derick heard one of those and said "why don't you take up guitar". That was about a year ago I think in march of 2008. So,I did.

Thanks for the nice comments. It is truly appreciated.

Freedom is a boy. 15 months old now. Best dog ever!