Hi Again, Ray!

This Rewrite is OK..borders on Good!

As someone else mentioned, SHOULD include Other Things Nudists DO, besides "Sunbathing"..IF you're gonna paint an ACCURATE Picture of the Practice. There's the "Isolated" kinda Skinny-Dipping, but moreover, there's the very "Communal" Sort at the Nude Resorts which is a Lot More Popular. (Hey, give it a TRY..THEN Write the Song. RESEARCH Makes ALL The Difference, in a Successful Song.) NO,I'm NOT Kidding!

To this end, consider investing in a Book on the Field of Songwriting. Once you've read ONE, you'll wanna buy MORE. But THERE you'll find MOST of The ANSWERS, some to Questions you haven't even Thought of Yet.

You can also Easily Study a Successful Song by simply Copying Down the Lyrics to Any of the Many "Hit Songs" on the Radio.

The "Hook" is usually the Song's TITLE...See how OFTEN the Writer REPEATS IT? (That's so Folks KNOW what to Go Out & BUY!) An "Outro" is usually an Altered LAST VERSE (Or CHORUS) that Plays as the Song Concludes. A "Bridge" is what Usually comes IN after 2 Verses (But CAN come in ANYWHERE The Writer CHOOSES To Use It) to both Break Up the About-to-Be "Monitony" (From hearing the SAME Repetitive Structure AGAIN) AND Usually (But Not Always) to Shoot the Music UP a Register ("Modulate Up" is frequently penned after the word "Bridge") so a Bridge'll have (Ideally) a Different LINE LENGTH or NUMBER OF LINES and/or RHYME SCHEME from the VERSEES Prior to it. As well as a Major Melody Change. AND (Yeah, Still MORE to tell ya!) a Bridge'll USUALLY Have Some NEW NUGGET of Information/Diffo "Slant"..that's NOT to be found in the VERSES.

You THEN write another VERSE after your Bridge, in the Same Structure (Usually) as the Previous 2...OR You Whip in a Final CHORUS/OUTRO, if you've already Said All you Set Out To.

Not to Confuse Ya, but there ARE Some Songs with 2, maybe MORE Bridges...They're Kinda like BUTTER On EGGS..."Add to Taste!" (& Not ALL Songs Require a Bridge...lotta Ol' Country Songs are "A-A-A" Structure...(Verse-Verse-Verse) (With a Repeating Last Line, or "Refrain")

Songs with a Bridge in 'em typically go "A-A-B-A"
There are all sorts of Other Combos--"A-B-B-A"...Etc. (This is Where that BOOK ya Need Kicks In!)

The Newer Pop-Oriented stuff these days Often has a "CLIMB" before the Chorus, too...a couple Lines where the melody rises UP, Then ya Hits the CHORUS.

Don't worry about "Pleasing Everybody"...you CAN'T! DO write songs YOU Enjoy, first & Foremost! SORRY if I seemed So Hard on Ya, first Song outta the Block...(But we DO Give as Honest-a-Critique as we Can Here...) But we ARE "On Your Side"...hey, if we can help make ya a Successful Songwriter, maybe you'll remember one of us "Strugglers" when you're up there makin' the Big Denario!

Good Luck with this one, and all the Ones that Follow,
Big Guy-Hug,
Stan