HiDee Brother Sam!

Good Poesie..quite personally-revealing. (Tho unless someone knows you live in NashCity, the "Lower Broad" reference might confuse a bit.)

Could be an Elegant Song...WITH a Chorus using your Title repeated enough we'd know the title IS "Within'". It'd work well as an AAA structure: VVChorus, VVChorus, VVChorus. Even a Refrain of 1-2 lines would work..something simple like "Where it all ends, & Where it begins..It's all WITHIN"

Keep-or-Sweep..& Good Luck with it...& that trip to The Coast someday!

Big Guy-Hug,
Stan