Originally Posted by Kaley Willow
I love this Scott...it could fit in anything from a themed CD to a family CD...to a kid's CD... I love how it makes me feel listening.

Melody is very lovely...very fitting....and lyrics are just a perfect match too...... Love your vocals and harmonies.

I want to ask you just one thing...Just curious if you are sold
100% on fleet?...because I'm thinking it means almost the same thing as fast..? If it was an intentionally done emphasis rhyme ...just smack me...for speaking up. grin

very best....
Kaley...

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Hi Kaley:

Nice to see you again.....

Yeah, you have a point. I should have done better with that line. smile

I want to keep fleet because of the rhyme with feet. Also it has, to me, a slightly different connotation than fast - kinda like fast but also nimble....

However, it's not different enough from fast to use both of them - so I should probably replace "fast". I liked the alliteration so I used it - but I can probably do better. smile

Thanks for making me think Kaley!

Scott