Katie, again thank you, my first intentions were to make it a song, I'm just not sure where to trim it, but, i'll work on it. And you're right, I like what you have put about the first verse.
I'm really new to this, I don't know why but so much stuff comes to me, it never did before, but it's like for some reason all this stuff is coming pouring out of me. thanks again, and I do really appreciate your advice. glyn