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Ali Angel
by Gary E. Andrews - 06/27/26 11:00 PM
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Riot Fest
by Gary E. Andrews - 06/21/26 10:51 PM
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Joined: Sep 2007
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Heather....
The rest of your tune I'll let you struggle with, but what stuck out to me like a sore thumb is the title and here is why.....
"You've already made up my heart" to me is a tad awkward ....
"You've already made up my heart" I'm guessing is a "playoff of" or an inverted "I've already made up my mind"...
In essence I believe what you are TRYING to say is these two ideas in ONE line....
"You've already CAPTURED my heart"
AND
"Ive already MADE UP MY MIND"
Hence the title..."You've already made up my heart"
Still, for whatever reason it's awkward to me....Anyways, that's my take on it.....
BTW....When I get a duet going you are my first choice....
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