Wendy: THere's so much good stuff packed into this song. Lots of pretty harmonies and I like the looseness of it. It just flows and it isn't forced. Very honest and great on the ears.

I wanted to to show you an option to possibly consider for the chorus:

Riding my chrome pony
Galloping at full speed
It's not quite want I wanted
But Its exactly what I need
We're past all redeeming
Past the point of peace
But Driving down this highway
I Found my sweet release

Just an idea inspired by the song....Paul

Last edited by Paul T Wentworth; 04/13/08 07:57 PM.