Hi Wendy

I really like the song and cannot for the life of me think why it could not have commercial appeal. Love the vocals and melody. I like where you put the harmonies. Surely you could sinc them up with a bit more practice and focus on it. The thing that bugs me a bit is the distortion on the guitar. I'd like less compression or what ever the effect you have on there, but I could be alone in that. Anywa, I really enjoy it. Keep going. smile jm


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