Hi Bree

Welcome back !

I definitely get the sense this one gives, that the singer has gone through the motion of carrying on, but now is realizing it's time to really GET to getting on... I think however having the advantage of reading it again helps clarify. I'm not so sure in singing this it will be that easy to understand what's going on for the listener as is.....

For me there's confusion in the first verse setting it up. Also, it sounds a little presumptuous to say ' the words you wouldn’t say' how does she know what they are if he didn't say them ?... Once you clear this up then I think the chorus will make more sense.

and maybe months gone by might be better for a time line.

I think this is a good one brewing. smile jm


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