I thought this had emotion..I thought this was well done...only 1 line did not work for mw...

From hurt and fear this ol' heart o' mine was like a lump o'coal) (cold stone)

IDK...for me lump of coal made it a christmas song and that does not match the rest...good job!!

Last edited by Ted(TeddyJoe)Bryson; 12/20/07 09:56 PM.