Teddy Joe,
It's good to meet ya on here, and hey, thanks for takin' the time to read through this...I will consider the lump o' coal line as I go through my rewriting process. Mine don't just come out perfect like couch's...ha...I've got to shine and polish a lyric before I even consider going to demo with it...I'll post the music on the mp3 if it goes to demo, it moves a little slow, but I'm having a great time developing the melody...hanks again...Moker