Stan:

These lyrics sing themselves to a reggae beat. And the word RIPPLE sounds great where it's repeated in the chorus...it just seems to roll along with the accent on the RIP.

Also, it's a cool concept. I liked the way you paint the picture of the ripples in the first verse and the image RIPPLE, RIPPLE, RIPPLEs throughout the song. Each chorus keeps the image alive.

Hey, I think I just learned something...

Mark


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