Hey Stan Got some idea with your hook.

Did you try some alliterration in the Ripple?
heres my world play.

simple Ripple people effect
Ripple dimple simple effect
simple people ripple effect

Maybe you can produce some meaning to that even unintilligeble lines make a nice hip hop or reggae tune.

Ripple is similar to the chaos theory. Or if some mess up with the time line as in back to the future the movie there is a ripple effect and the effect is so enormous that you cannot determine the reverbaration of the effect througout the present and into the future.

I was watching the 1st season of Heroes before and I recall the japanese guy who can teleport into space and time. Hero Nakamura said if you save the cheer leader you save the world. Just similar to the ripple effect. If they prevent the. death of the cheerleader the ripple effect in the future might have prevented. Anyways..... Just a story but I like your lyrics but I am not impressed with this one compare to some of your previous lyrics.

Good day Stan. I was busy the whole day with my practice. Saw 100 elementary and highschool teachers today and screened them for heart problem and obesity. So far they are all candidate for obesity. Our country is not poor especially with food ha! This teachers eats a lot especially during their breaktime and their hips are so huge beleive me your libido will disappear the moment you see them.

Lynman




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