Hi Derek,

I just wanted to let you know that I don't offer up critiques on this forum. For me this was a place to write without pressure to conform to anyone's rules. Now I see that Brian and others have aspired for this forum to become more than that. So, I'll probably stop posting my own works in honor of his intentions here. When this forum first started there was no moderator or guidelines. So, I took the liberty to simply share.

I knew you would understand me having no comments about your actual post. I'm in no position to critique it since I have no background education in doing such as that. smile

biCash,
Vanessa