I used to write this type of literature when I was very young(15)Now I am 45. I like to see these now and then to remind me of what I went thru when I was young. Hormones and emotions battling it out at the bus stop. It is truely a way to disect, embody and vocalize your emotional thoughts.

For this I think it is very well worded, very simple and to the point. Very nice in imagery. I would love to see you take this further and darker.

I enjoyed it, Thanks!


I finally decided to hang a "Pet Door" and throw out the Litter Box. Now I have poop all over my yard........