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Riot Fest
by Gary E. Andrews - 06/21/26 10:51 PM
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Joined: Apr 2007
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Hey Calvin, Leave it to you to $exualize a coffee pot.  :o Wonderful idea, though, especially as I'm currently nursing my second cup. The song itself is your usual playground of fun. My only issue would be in the second couplet of your chorus, where I wonder if you were perhaps sleepin' on the job?  How about something a bit more vivid? What if we woke up to find Our coffee pot was dead Without our jolt of java
Could we face the day ahead? OR Could we even make our bed?Of course, you know me and my obsession with meter...mind if I add a word or two here and there? We'd have to DRAG OURSELVES TO town GET DOWN THERE RIGHT AWAY The price is not the issue here We're QUITE prepared to pay NO we don't need one with a clock YOU SEE, we're already up ALL WE'RE LOOKING FOR IS SOME quick COFFEE in our favorite cup I know you're a fan of shorter phrasing, but I just added a syllable here and there for a little variety -- as you know, do with it what you will.... Otherwise, thought this was a fun one...would love to have included somewhere (maybe in the R-rated sequel  ) something about the gal -- like the coffee -- helping to "perk him up" in the morning.... :o Thanks for playing...you have yet to disappoint!! Ciao for now, Beth
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