Howdy Wy,

First off, LOVE the hook. It reminds me of that old commercial jingle, "I'm gonna WASH that MAN right OUTta my HAIR"! Great original premise....though I'm wondering if Mr. Maytag had anything to do with this wink.....

Sorry about your bridge...I'm sure it'll either come back to you or someone will help you out (maybe me later....if I can). For what it's worth, I think your third chorus could work well as the bridge, with a bit of tweaking, since it does wrap up the storyline:

Sometimes I wonder if maybe
I should send you a rendezvous letter
If I really got to know you
Would my dreams get worse or much better

Now for my usual nitpicking:

Verse One:
Would you mind terribly scratching the "AND" from the beginning of line two? (read: "How many freakin' times do I have to reMIND you about this crazy !?) So I'm going to tweak a tad, okay?

WE FIRST MET BY CHANCE AT A PARTY
THEN ONCE AGAIN OUT ON THE STREET
SINCE NOTHIN' HAPPENED BETWEEN US
HOW'D YOU GET SUCH A HOLD ON ME?

I guess that was a fairly comprehensive "tweak", huh?)
Then the only other little nit is the word "UP" in the last line of the chorus...I don't think you need the extra syllable to maintain your meaning. Maybe you could also mix it up a little in the second half?

I'm washing my dreams
In the washing machine
I'm not that kinda' girl I know
BUT SINCE I MET YOU
I NEED TO BE SCRUBBED CLEAN
I wake up aglow from head to toe


Okay, I've been pretty liberal with the sledge tonight, Wy, since I know you can take it (LOL). Hope all suggestions taken in the right way -- as just that, SUGGESTIONS, keep or sweep, baby!

Good luck finding a missing section of your lyric...if you think it's necessary. I'm not sure that it does....

Ciao for now,
Beth

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