Hey Beth G,
Yeah, Peter had a good point on the consistent language, '(Nother welcome Peter).
Replacing 'fessed up" with confessed would flow better too the way I hear it. I think the only other slang is "sec" which shouldn't be that hard to resolve either.
This line in the C-------
I was in control of where I went?---I guess the singer could bring it off as a question but might be easier to say--
WAS I IN CONTROL etc.
These 2 lines seem a bit too "easy"
What followed was a date
Knew quickly she was great
Maybe have the second one --We wound up at my place. Well I know it was a first date but everything went "swimmingly" you see. (Mattera' fact he had a swimming pool that they could indulge in. (I mesn if they "wanted' to. <G>
Yeah, it might be too big a suibject to cover in one song.
maybe limit it to "proving" it
one way or the other.
Still an interesting subject though
Wy