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Re: "A Series of Random Events" -- rusty, need help.... Beth G. Williams #529196 08/07/07 02:59 PM
Joined: Jul 2007 Posts: 29 C Cynthia Lewis Casual Observer
Cynthia Lewis Casual Observer C Joined: Jul 2007 Posts: 29	I learned a lot from Peter's critique of your song - going to check my lyrics for that criteria as well. Why not make the Chorus present tense? "IS IT SELF-DETERMINATION? OR MY KEEN IMAGINATION", etc.

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"A Series of Random Events" -- Alternate Versioin--WAY DOWN!	Beth G. Williams	08/07/07 07:28 AM
Re: "A Series of Random Events" -- rusty, need help....	PeterJ	08/07/07 09:32 AM
Re: "A Series of Random Events" -- rusty, need help....	Beth G. Williams	08/07/07 03:12 PM
Re: "A Series of Random Events" -- rusty, need help....	Cynthia Lewis	08/07/07 06:59 PM
Re: "A Series of Random Events" -- rusty, need help....	Beth G. Williams	08/07/07 07:16 PM
Re: "A Series of Random Events" -- rusty, need help....	Wyman Lloyd (D)	08/07/07 09:12 PM
Re: "A Series of Random Events" -- rusty, need help....	Richard G Blum (D)	08/07/07 10:01 PM
Re: "A Series of Random Events" -- rusty, need help....	Beth G. Williams	08/08/07 12:19 AM
Re: "A Series of Random Events" -- rusty, need help....	PeterJ	08/08/07 12:36 AM
Re: "A Series of Random Events" -- rusty, need help....	Beth G. Williams	08/08/07 01:37 AM
Re: "A Series of Random Events" -- rusty, need help....	Wyman Lloyd (D)	08/08/07 12:44 AM
Re: "A Series of Random Events" -- rusty, need help....	Wyman Lloyd (D)	08/08/07 01:40 AM
Re: "A Series of Random Events" -- rusty, need help....	RichardMiddleton	08/08/07 02:12 AM
Re: "A Series of Random Events" -- rusty, need help....	Beth G. Williams	08/08/07 03:23 AM
Re: "A Series of Random Events" -- rusty, need help....	RichardMiddleton	08/08/07 04:22 AM
Re: "A Series of Random Events" -- rusty, need help....	Beth G. Williams	08/08/07 04:45 AM
Re: "A Series of Random Events" -- rusty, need help....	Beth G. Williams	08/08/07 02:47 AM
Re: "A Series of Random Events" -- rusty, need help....	Beth G. Williams	08/07/07 10:05 PM
Re: "A Series of Random Events" -- rusty, need help....	Beth G. Williams	08/08/07 12:12 AM
Re: "A Series of Random Events" -- rusty, need help....	Charlann Shepherd	08/08/07 05:22 AM
Re: "A Series of Random Events" -- rusty, need help....	Beth G. Williams	08/08/07 05:49 AM
Re: "A Series of Random Events" -- rusty, need help....	Beth G. Williams	08/08/07 06:37 AM
Re: "A Series of Random Events" -- rusty, need help....	PeterJ	08/08/07 06:43 AM
Re: "A Series of Random Events" -- rusty, need help....	Beth G. Williams	08/08/07 06:53 AM
Re: "A Series of Random Events" -- rusty, need help....	Sofa King Bixby	08/08/07 07:12 AM
Re: "A Series of Random Events" -- rusty, need help....	Beth G. Williams	08/08/07 07:20 AM
Re: "A Series of Random Events" -- rusty, need help....	Beth G. Williams	08/08/07 06:07 PM
Re: "A Series of Random Events" -- rusty, need help....	PeterJ	08/09/07 01:58 AM
Re: "A Series of Random Events" -- rusty, need help....	Beth G. Williams	08/09/07 02:07 AM
Re: "A Series of Random Events" -- rusty, need help....	PeterJ	08/09/07 03:35 AM
Re: "A Series of Random Events" -- rusty, need help....	Beth G. Williams	08/09/07 04:29 AM
Re: "A Series of Random Events" -- rusty, need help....	Ben Burton	08/09/07 05:49 AM
Re: "A Series of Random Events" -- rusty, need help....	Beth G. Williams	08/09/07 06:16 AM
Re: "A Series of Random Events" -- rusty, need help....	Mel	08/10/07 04:40 AM
Re: "A Series of Random Events" -- rusty, need help....	PeterJ	08/10/07 05:51 AM
Re: "A Series of Random Events" -- rusty, need help....	Beth G. Williams	08/10/07 04:51 PM
Re: "A Series of Random Events" -- rusty, need help....	Sofa King Bixby	08/10/07 05:52 PM
Re: "A Series of Random Events" -- rusty, need help....	Beth G. Williams	08/10/07 07:47 PM
Re: "A Series of Random Events" -- rusty, need help....	Beth G. Williams	08/10/07 04:48 PM
Re: "A Series of Random Events" -- rusty, need help....	"Tampa Stan" Good (D)	08/13/07 06:44 AM
Re: "A Series of Random Events" -- rusty, need help....	PeterJ	08/13/07 07:27 AM
Re: "A Series of Random Events" -- rusty, need help....	Beth G. Williams	08/13/07 03:29 PM
Re: "A Series of Random Events" -- rusty, need help....	Beth G. Williams	08/13/07 03:22 PM
Re: "A Series of Random Events" -- rusty, need help....	Charlann Shepherd	08/15/07 04:40 PM
Re: "A Series of Random Events" -- rusty, need help....	Beth G. Williams	08/15/07 06:29 PM
Re: "A Series of Random Events" -- rusty, need help....	"Tampa Stan" Good (D)	08/13/07 06:29 AM
Re: "A Series of Random Events" -- rusty, need help....	Beth G. Williams	08/13/07 03:18 PM
Re: "A Series of Random Events" -- Rewrite #1 about 6 posts down	Charlann Shepherd	08/08/07 04:57 AM
Re: "A Series of Random Events" -- Rewrite #1 about 6 posts down	Beth G. Williams	08/08/07 05:13 AM
Re: "A Series of Random Events" -- Alternate Versioin--WAY DOWN!	Joice Marie	08/09/07 05:33 AM
Re: "A Series of Random Events" -- Alternate Versioin--WAY DOWN!	Beth G. Williams	08/09/07 06:24 AM
Re: "A Series of Random Events" -- Alternate Versioin--WAY DOWN!	PeterJ	08/09/07 08:50 AM
Re: "A Series of Random Events" -- Alternate Versioin--WAY DOWN!	Beth G. Williams	08/09/07 04:24 PM

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