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Louis, I absolutely love this song.... it gave me chills......and I still have them. it is very good, in my ever so humble opinion.
However.... (don't you hate that, its like 'but') I hear some phrasing issues in both verse and chorus. Basically, I am hearing you cut off your phrases at times and entering into a new section too early. it's the drummer in me (ok, and some formal training with one of stan kenton's arranger/writers)
This song is sooooo good that I would recommend pushing it on but working out the phrasing first. it's very subtle and it would be awkward for you at first because you are used to its present state, but it would make for even better sound. If i can help or explain further, let me know
great song!
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