Hi everyone!
Do you remember your first poem? I started writing poems in my early teens. (At least ones that I can still remember) If you'd like to share one of your very first tries...let's check them out! I was always the flowery, pensive type. Here's one from when I was 12 years old...(only a few years ago!)

Softly does your gentle breath
brush against my cheek as the night's warm breeze
does play with my hair,
and the moonstreaked clouds
move slowly in the air,
creating pictures in the sky
and casting shadows on the sand,
that once was filled with children's song
and castles made by hand...

Last edited by Thompson; 05/12/07 01:16 AM.

"And, in the end, the love you take is equal to the love you make." Paul McCartney