Mike, I hate to say it but that plot sounds implausible. I can't imagine a chaplain participating in such a scam(unless profit was involved) or a warden, either. Even the most liberal of clergymen would know it's truth, not trickery, that would "save" a sinner. The dialogue and imagery seems a little dry, too. good luck with it.


Nashville demos etc:

https://www.soundclick.com/bands3/default.cfm?bandID=431939

other demos:

https://soundcloud.com/wabash-cannibal

Amazon Kindle books by Robert George you may enjoy:

1) Americana

2) Teenage Graceland

3) The Will to Be

4) Fort Mystery

5) Wheel Sea

6) My One True Love