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Lot Long
by Gary E. Andrews - 11/10/26 11:20 AM
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I agree with Christine...use the stanza angle to give it a solid pause where YOU think it should go. On the other hand...if you'd prefer the reader to interpret it more themselves then I suppose it's just peachy as is. It definitely rings true...that "altered state" is most always more tranquil than any reality! And it's nice to know that life doesn't always make sense to someone besides me.  Well written! Bree
The ideal poet has a genius for making the things we see every day seem new. ~ Samuel Johnson I write because I breathe, I breathe because I write. ~ Me www.soundclick.com/breeg
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