Wow, that had to be quite an experience! Had me glued all the way through, Bobbie! Only thing that I had to wonder about was in the bridge: "guess He left me for a reason" ... I was wondering why she thought He left her, but then I realized you meant that He let her live ... left her here on earth. For clarification, I might say "Guess He let me live for a reason" or "Guess He left me HERE for a reason". Otherwise, really good writing!

Hugs,

ML

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