Hey musica,

Those vocals are a knockout mate. And the snare is a nice touch.

If a any comments, they would be the change to a minor cord after he first verse ( the Ahhhh's ) , 3rd bar I think. Because it is such an uplifting song, how abot trying a maj7th or suspended phrasing. (Sorry I can't pick the key at the moment, for example G/G6th over an A bass. ) At this point, it would give the song an upwards direction, and use that particular phrasing as you have done at the end, which works well. The snare could come out of syncapation and play a little straighter for maybe a verse or single chorus.

Only lyrical crit would be "flower to the sun" being replaced with something a little more abstract.

Coincidentally, have been swimming in the rain with my kids this week, ( school holidays ) warm sun showers. They thought I was mad at first, then we had a great time. You've captured that mood spot on. It's a great song, probably the best you have put up here. Good luck with it.

cheers, niteshift

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