Another great write, Bobbie! My only stumble was the 'Guinness' line. Methinks you want to use it because its the best known Irish beer, but as any Irishman will tell ya: it's the POUR that really counts. so you could try:

Like a well-poured pint refreshes

As always, just my 2-Take what helps, dump what don't--Al

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