Curtis,

This is a very good song. I like the vocal, I like the sound. There are some very good things in the lyric, but IMHO, I'm not sure the lyric as a whole rises to the level of a great song, assuming you're competing with songs to get cut. I hope I'm wrong, and I wish you the very best of luck with it.

Bill

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We too often throw around the word "great" like it was a frisbee, instead of the manhole cover it should be.