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Hard-Fi
by Gary E. Andrews - 06/19/26 06:43 PM
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Joined: Oct 2017
Posts: 8,933 Likes: 87
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I think your first verse is really, really, good.
It sounds like a song you'd hear on pop radio.
I think the following verses are weaker in comparison. And in my view your making it about everybody else. What they see, when the song us how you feel.
If it were mine, I'd build it around the first Verse. Go into detail about how your dufferent now, its kinda vague.
And I think your repeating same kinda stuff as it goes on just to legthen it.
Each verse should introduce something new.
I have a similar song called..In search of the me.
Good start..
Last edited by Fdemetrio; 3 hours ago.
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