Originally Posted by Rob B.
Cool song...
If there's something here you can use feel free ... No crediting required.

https://suno.com/s/3PlaJR0LkoCrulUL


Yeah', that's what happens when you just throw words at music... winds up sounding like rap that you can't follow without the lyrics. Not that it matters anyway, you abandoned the storyline in the first verse. Typical generic 4chord Pop.

Sorry, not impressed. Not even close to what's in my head.

I would say "nice try", but that obviously only took SUNO about 2 minutes lol...

I do like the idea of a little pre-chorus though... may work on that smile