Originally Posted by Kay-lynn Carew
Originally Posted by David Gill
There is something about this song that grips me. I love the harmonies in your original.

Aside from wanting some minor tweaks to the lyric (because I can't help myself wanting to change things for no good reason) I truly like this song. Both the original and the cover.

Well done, Kay-lynn.

Peace,

Dave


Thank you for listening and commenting Dave........What lyrics suggestions are you thinking?


(Suggestions below in all caps)


I'm never gonna find love and you're right
IT MAY BE around the corner JUST OUT OF SIGHT
BUT I'm not lucky. This won't work and
Why do I even try?

[Chorus]
The secret is there's no secret now
YOU ALREADY KNOW WHAT LOVE CAN do
Life's GIVEN EVERYTHING YOU NEED
the Universe is just waiting on you

[Verse 2]
Voice in my head tells me to stop
My heart INSISTS ON SAYIN' oh hell why not
What MUST I do SO BOTH can
GET ALONG and try?

[Chorus]
The secret is there's no secret now
YOU ALREADY KNOW WHAT LOVE CAN do
Life's GIVEN EVERYTHING YOU NEED
the Universe is just waiting on you

[Bridge]
The answer is you have the answer now
Right there INSIDE of you
everything you say out loud
Becomes your truth

[Chorus]
The secret is there's no secret now
YOU ALREADY KNOW WHAT LOVE CAN do
Life's GIVEN EVERYTHING YOU NEED
the Universe is just waiting on you
(Ooh)
Waiting on you


As always, KOS.

Peace,

Dave

"Where there's a Gill, there's a way"