Originally Posted by Sunset Poet
IMO...

The song sounds commercially viable.
It's a happy and uplifting message.
V1 begins with a clear picture of the woman being featured and the song continuously develops an image of her as it progresses.
The music is upbeat and is as good of a match as any, for the lyrics.

Personally, I like these lines.

‘Cause a diamond’s just a rock till it’s been through the fire
She’s the only heart that’s ever taken me higher

FWIW2U....good song



I also liked the line Cause a diamond's just a rock til it's been through the fire (any woman would love to hear that line)

The next line seems to just get thrown in there though. Maybe something with a little more meat?

The next line should finish the thought........... in some way.

"It Mattered to THAT One"