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We love guns and the red white and blue Quotin’ Ricky Bobby and our Jesus tattoos Yeah we sure gotta a lotta rednecks ‘round here We pour out our hearts over an ice cold beer We ride Harleys we drive John Deere’s Yeah we sure gotta a lotta rednecks ‘round here
See,, this chorus right here just says exactly what the verses are saying.. This is a verse that's trying to be a chorus but it's not.
I like all the visuals in the verses and the chorus, but the chorus has to drive home some "point":... i.e. She thinks my tractor's sexy.
Maybe write the chorus about how city folk do things they think are fun, but us out here in the country think that's just dumb. LOL
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