Originally Posted by johnparagreen
Hi David, I really like the gist here, here's a few thoughts keep or sweep,
I'd make the title, You're my person.
I try to avoid ( I don't) it's way overused imo,
you have already said you're my person, no need to mention anyone else, keep it focussed on the recipient,
I'd try and keep it positive, avoid tears etc,
anyway just my thoughts,
all the best, john

Thank you, John, for the read and feedback.
I'm sorry I didn't see this sooner but will certainly consider your input.
Makes a whole lot of sense. :-)

Peace,

Dave

"Where there's a Gill, there's a way"