I do alot of Springsteen inspired stuff. This is not one of them.

And this is based on true account, strung out women still are out there ...she Said most of that

If you wanna say desperate characters, ok, I can see that. But this is a byrds knock off.

It's raw and gritty, wasn't going for purity.

Vocal prowess doesn't matter, it's right for the song. You out too much emphasis with soaring vocals.

But how bout a little credit. ? The economy if words. To get that in your face melody is a skill.

Try rewriting new words to this. From head to toe see what you get

And credit for using phrases you don't hear everyday in songs...the idea is to be different.

And how bout it STILL being a pop song and entertaining despite the grim yet hopeful storyline.

Nothing that catches attention?

I'm looking for an antibody, to help me fight a soul disease? When have you written a humanity driven song like this?

Bruce excelled at that.

I'm on fire has been covered by dozens of people.

I disagree it's appeal..true if not Springsteen's song than how?

But that's any song, star power is needed.

Last edited by Fdemetrio; 09/25/25 11:51 AM.