Rob

On one hand, you are asking to be left out of the "wars." Admirable.

But on the other hand, you are over here clearly playing insidious games, and blatantly lying about it.
Under the pretext of strict technicality. No sale.
We both know that you are. Picking at scabs and stoking a fire.
If you want to continue this, well, go ahead.

As for your lyric's vocal and genre.
I think that the lyrics (to your non-derivative song) convey, hypersensitivity, an over-reactive hysterical element, and neuroticism with an historically effeminate lean.
For those reasons, I think that the brooding female vocal that I coupled with the lyrics is a much better marriage with your lyrics.
And it carries the message to a listener in a much more compelling and convincing manner.