Originally Posted by David Gill
Well done, Rob!!

Nicely written (although my brain wants to change a couple words/lines, but that's just me so ignore that).
The song overall is wonderful and you did an excellent job with it, sir!!

Peace,
Dave

Hi Dave,
I know exactly what you’re talking about. What you have to know here is that Martin wrote the original lyrics. Martin is from Austria. His English is pretty good, but he’s not a native speaker. I often work with lyricists from Europe who write in English. In most cases their English is not perfect. I try to avoid rewriting everything. In Martin’s lyrics I did correct a few of the things that were obvious but I always try to leave as much of the original lyrics as possible untouched so the lyricists still recognize that they wrote the song. I think you described it quite well, there are lines that you would probably want to change but they aren’t so bad that they actually need to be changed.
I’m glad you liked the song.

All the best - Robert