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Tin Lung
by Gary E. Andrews - 08/27/26 04:12 PM
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TV Drama
by Gary E. Andrews - 08/26/26 03:19 PM
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TV Drama
by Raymond Byabazaire - 08/26/26 12:29 AM
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Wendy Woo
by Gary E. Andrews - 08/22/26 12:36 AM
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John Eddy
by Gary E. Andrews - 08/21/26 03:25 PM
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Hey Gary,
very well-written. I can really relate to the topic of this song. The simple title grabbed my attention. You wrote the strongest bridge I've seen in quite a while. I like how you repeat the title not only in the chorus (which is standard) but also at the end of the bridge but that might be a repetition of the chorus. The "oh oh ohs" combined with a one-line chorus probably make the song very catchy. I'd love to hear this one.
All the best - Robert
Last edited by Rob B.; 08/30/25 01:29 PM.
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