Originally Posted by David Gill
Hey Marty,

Thanks for the listen and suggestion. In this case the song was strongly influenced by Def Leppard. As I wrote it, I could hear them playing it in my head and it drove me forward. It saddens me I am unable to properly present the song with the music intended. Perhaps I may yet sit down and pluck at my guitar one day to get it a bit closer to its truest form.
I realize that for the most part, long, drawn-out songs can be a bit of an acquired taste, but I must create as the creation demands. :-)

I appreciate your feedback, sir!

Peace,

Dave

Dave,

You can literally hum any old melody into your phone or if you have a laptop/desktop with even a dirt cheap chinese made mic for a couple bucks and Suno will use that melody and intonations in any resulting song. Additionally, it looks like Suno is going have it's own DAW set up. I actually hate their current editing options (I can't get it to work logically like when it cuts off only the last 2 words, which it sometimes fixates on. I even pulled an entire verse, pre chorus and chorus out on the song in question, it gave me back a long version and STILL cut off the last two words. So I rewrote the last line, it STILL cut off the last two words. And the edit bay thing will not just let you finish the song like it used to, it adds random stuff for like 4 minutes instead! But I digress. Everyone hums now and then, while driving play around with a simple melody through a verse and chorus, then upload your hum via a recording into your phone or CPU and let it make a song based on it. Do it for fun, if for no other reason. They best part is then you own 100% of the song no matter how these court cases resolve. And you will get better the more you do it. You like Def Leppard, so hum one of their tunes, then just do something a bit different, go up where they go down and vice versa, speed up when they slow, slow down when they speed up, pretty easily you will have a unique melody of your own. You are missing half the fun of songwriting!

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